my dream job ( final draft )

               

                        Doctor is one of the oldest professions that had always been honored by others. These people cure us from various diseases, give us useful recommendations in order to make us healthier and also they spend every day thinking of our health. Moreover, they deal with constant stresses because in their profession they have to cure diseases that lead to death. There are many people includes me who want to connect their life with this profession today. However, everyone should consider many important facts before making this important decision.

                        There are many advantages of being a doctor. First, It is a very interesting profession that requires constant communication with people.Second, It is also a rewarding job, because doctors help sick or injured people to recover. Third,There is always a chance for career growth.Finally, Salaries are usually very high in any country around the world .

                         We can’t say this work is without disadvantages. Firstly, it’s a tiring job as doctors work shifts and often work at night. In addition, it can be depressing as they often see people suffering. Furthermore, it is Very risky profession. As doctors deal with peoples' lives every day, a great responsibility lie on their shoulders. The final one is Irregular working hours as Sometimes doctors are required to work at night and on weekends.

                      

                        To conclude, If you have decided to become a doctor, ask yourself if you are ready for responsibilities that will lie on your shoulders. Although there are many advantages of this honored occupation, there are many disadvantages that you should consider before choosing this career. 

                                   

                        Doctor is one of the oldest professions that had always been honored by others. These people cure us from various diseases, give us useful recommendations in order to make us healthier and also they spend every day thinking of our health. Moreover, they deal with constant stresses because in their profession they have to cure diseases that lead to death. There are many people includes me who want to connect their life with this profession today. However, everyone should consider many important facts before making this important decision.

                        There are many advantages of being a doctor. First, It is a very interesting profession that requires constant communication with people.Second, It is also a rewarding job, because doctors help sick or injured people to recover. Third, There is always a chance for career growth.Finally, Salaries are usually very high in any country around the world .

                         We can’t say this work is without disadvantages. Firstly, it’s a tiring job as doctors work shifts and often work at night. In addition, it can be depressing as they often see people suffering. Furthermore, it is Very risky profession. As doctors deal with peoples' lives every day, a great responsibility lie on their shoulders. The final one is Irregular working hours as Sometimes doctors are required to work at night and on weekends.

                      

                        To conclude, If you have decided to become a doctor, ask yourself if you are ready for responsibilities that will lie on your shoulders. Although there are many advantages of this honored occupation, there are many disadvantages that you should consider before choosing this career. 

outline ( my dream job )

Introduction:- 
                        Being a doctor is a dream of many pupils, but it is not easy, you must work hard to achieve this dream. Being a doctor is as any other job has many responsibilities and advantages and disadvantages.

Body:- 

advantages :-

·                        Ability to provide service and support to others

·                        Ability to save lives

·                        Continuously Learning

·                        Appreciation for medical science

·                        Teach students and patients about medicine

·                        Rewarding

·                        Decent Salary

disadvantages:- 

·                        Spend several years training and preparing at schools and hospitals (e.g. medical school, internship, residency)

·                        Long process to acquire a license

·                        Difficult

·                        Tiring

·                        Stressful

·                        Depressing

·                        Time consuming

·                        A great deal of Responsibility

·                        Managed care means more difficulty earning a high salary.

Conclusion :-

                 To sum up, every job in the world has many advantages and disadvantages, So we should like what we work in order to work what we like . 

Final draft ( The educational system in Egypt )

                               Knowledge and education are the backbone of every society. Knowledge is power and critical to development of any country . Improving the quality of education in Egypt is the number one factor that needs immediate attention. There is a unified call in Egypt for improving primary and secondary education to prepare people for the workforce.

 

                               Our educational system suffers from many problems . First, lack of funding results in the lack of buildings and this reduces the number of class rooms which forces too many students into classes and forces schools to work in shifts. Insufficient funds lead to sub par salaries for teachers which affects on their productivity as they are often obliged to earn from other sources in order to live with basic needs. Second, the huge number of students whether in schools or universities affects the quality of education, less interaction between students and teachers, many social problems like quarrels between students render the education meaningless. Third , the methods of teaching used in Egypt are traditional and new methods are usually ignored. The teaching relies upon rote learning and does not take into account new methods such as research and practical learning. Finally, unfortunately the curriculum in egypt lacks new information and is not updated periodically in an accurate way.

                               There are many solutions that are suggested to develope our eduational system. The government should allow and encourage the role of community organizations to build new schools and universities as this can help in solving the problem of overcrowded schools and universities. Egypt should cooperate with developed countries to see how they improved their systems and on what rules these systems are working. The curriculum needs to be updated on a yearly basis in order to reflect new inventions and discoveries. Text books should be written in a more interesting way eliminating useless material. The curriculum should also be compatible with the needs of students and should be reflective of the traditions and needs of the society. Teachers need to be trained more in order to educate students in a more useful and interesting way. There should be teacher workshops on a regular basis and teachers should be paid competitive salaries so they can concentrate solely on teaching rather than searching for additional work.

                                 

                                      There are many problems in education and we are putting in place plans to gradually resolve them. But we cannot solve these problems overnight. Students , teachers and parents should co-operate together to solve this serious problem that determines the future of our country.

first draft ( The educational system in egypt )

                                                

                               Knowledge and education are the backbone of every society. Knowledge is power and critical to development of any country . Improving the quality of education in Egypt is the number one factor that needs immediate attention. There is a unified call in Egypt for improving primary and secondary education to prepare people for the workforce.

                               Our educational system suffers from many problems . First, lack of funding results in the lack of buildings and this reduces the number of class rooms which forces too many students into classes and forces schools to work in shifts. Insufficient funds lead to sub par salaries for teachers which affects on their productivity as they are often obliged to earn from other sources in order to live with basic needs. Second, the huge number of students whether in schools or universities affects the quality of education, less interaction between students and teachers, many social problems like quarrels between students render the education meaningless. Third , the methods of teaching used in Egypt are traditional and new methods are usually ignored. The teaching relies upon rote learning and does not take into account new methods such as research and practical learning. Finally, unfortunately the curriculum in egypt lacks new information and is not updated periodically in an accurate way.

                                                                   There are many solutions that are suggested to develope our eduational system. The government should allow and encourage the role of community organizations to build new schools and universities as this can help in solving the problem of overcrowded schools and universities. Egypt should cooperate with developed countries to see how they improved their systems and on what rules these systems are working. The curriculum needs to be updated on a yearly basis in order to reflect new inventions and discoveries. Text books should be written in a more interesting way eliminating useless material. The curriculum should also be compatible with the needs of students and should be reflective of the traditions and needs of the society. Teachers need to be trained more in order to educate students in a more useful and interesting way. There should be teacher workshops on a regular basis and teachers should be paid competitive salaries so they can concentrate solely on teaching rather than searching for additional work.

                                 

                       There are many problems in education and we are putting in place plans to gradually resolve them. But we cannot solve these problems overnight. Students , teachers and parents should co-operate together to solve this serious problem that determines the future of our country.

outline ( The educational system in Egypt )

Introduction :-
                       Improving the quality of education in Egypt is the number one factor that needs immediate attention. There is a unified call in Egypt for improving primary and secondary education to prepare people for the workforce.

Body :-
             The educational system in Egypt suffers from many problems :-
            

             1.High school teaching, bases mostly on rote and does not give students practical skills and leaves them unprepared for college and hinders their transition to the workplace.

             2.Overcrowded classrooms.

             3. Lack of good libraries or office space for teachers are problems that run through the system from the earliest years to final classes.

             4.School textbooks really need to be updated.

Conclusion :-                  

                    There are many problems in education and we are putting in place plans to gradually resolve them. But we cannot solve these problems overnight. Students,teachers and parents should co-operate together to solve this serious problem that detemines the future of our country.

Final draft ( facebook )

                             
                               Facebook has been a widely known name among people who are so into it. People who have their account on Facebook are using more of their time to get in touch with other individuals despite the distance and lack of time. Facebook has been a great community for many people, it has its advantages and disadvantages.

                                  The advantages of facebook are several . Facebook Lets user search for new and old friends . Facebook makes communicating with strangers or individuals you do not know less difficult . Facebook helps you to join groups having corresponding likes and dislikes . Facebook  lets users to check students who are in the same class, living within the same location, or coming from the same academy .

                                    In spite of the advantages of facebook , it also has many disadvantages . Long distance may weaken relationships between people . facebook is unsupported by physical appearance . Stalking is possible in facebook . Acquaintances be labeled as friends . In addition to the addiction of facebook .

                                   In my point of view , in spite of the advantages and disadvantages of facebook , it is still in demand and popular among the young people. There are about 10,000 students who are joining Facebook everyday. We may use facebook to be in touch with our friends and to keep up with current events but we should use it carefully and under supervisor of our parents .

                                 

                             
                               Facebook has been a widely known name among people who are so into it. People who have their account on Facebook are using more of their time to get in touch with other individuals despite the distance and lack of time. Facebook has been a great community for many people, it has its advantages and disadvantages.


                               The advantages of facebook are several . Facebook Lets user search for new and old friends . Makes it less difficult when communicating with strangers or |individuals you do not know . Makes it |simpler to join groups having corresponding likes and dislikes . Lets users to check students who are in the same class, living within the same location, or coming from the same academy .


                               In spite of the advantages of facebook , it also has many disadvantages . Long distance may weaken relationships between people . facebook is unsupported by physical adjacency . Stalking is possible in facebook . Acquaintances be labeled as friends . In addition to the addiction of facebook .


                               In my point of view , in spite of the Facebook advantages and disadvantages, it still is getting demand and popularity among the young people. There are about 10,000 students who are joining Facebook everyday. We may use facebook to be in touch with our friends and to keep up with current events but we should use it carefully and under supervisor of our parents .

prewriting ( facebook )

Introduction :-
                       Nowadays facebook is a very important way for making new friends, get informations and                        keep up with current events .

Body :-
             Reasons for agreeing with using facebook :-

                . Allows user search for new and old friends .
                · Accessible to chosen universities having a high level of security .
                · Makes it less awkward when communicating with strangers or people you are not familiar with .
                · Makes it easier to join groups having similar likes and dislikes .
                · Allows members to check students who are taking the same class, living within the  same   area,                    or coming from the same academy .

            The counter opinion of using facebook :-

                   . Overcrowding .
                   · Weakening long distance relationship .
                   · Unsupported by physical adjacency .
                   · The addiction of facebook .
                   · Stalking is possible .
                   · Acquaintances be labeled as friends .


Conclusion :-

                     facebook is a fantastic way to be in touch with our friends but we should use it carefully 
                     and  under supervisor of our parents .

pollution in egypt ( final draft )

                      Pollution has become a major issue over the years because it contaminates the earth's enviroment and affects human health . Air pollution is not a new topic . It is a problem that we have noticed since the industrial revolution when trees , houses and cars were covered in soot from the factories . Egypt suffers from all kinds of pollution , air pollution ,sound pollution and marine pollution but I'll write about air pollution as clean air is very important to live healthy .


                      The various causes of air pollution that releases harmful gases into the atmosphere are caused due to the increasing number of power plants and manufacturing units or industries that mostly have activities related to the burning of fuels . Besides, most automobiles, marine vessels and  activities that involve the burning of wood .  Fumes that are released from aerosol sprays . Military activities that involve the use of nuclear weapons . All are the numerous causes of air pollution .


                      Air pollution is actually the addition of any harmful substances to the atmosphere, which causes the damaging of the environment, human health and the quality of life .With the development in industry, came along the increase in air pollution, which occurs inside homes, schools, offices even in the countryside. Consequently there has been an increase in the death rates resulting from various diseases caused by air pollution varying from breathing problem to lung cancer. Air pollution does not only affect people but it also damages the whole ecological system in which plants and animals are harmed as well. Air pollution has reached such a critical stage where it affects the earth's atmosphere as it lets in more harmful radiation from the sun. Consequently, our polluted atmosphere is becoming a better insulator, thus, preventing heat from escaping back into space. That is why there is a global rise in temperature which scientists refer to as " global warming". As a result of this rise in temperature the world food supply and sea level will be affected, also there is the probability of increase in the tropical disease.


                      To sum up, air pollution is a very serious problem which threatens our lifes on earth, so people and government should co-operate to over come this problem .

                

pollution in egypt ( first draft )

                     Pollution is a very serious enviromental problem . There are many kinds of pollution : air pollution , sound pollution and marine pollution . Egypt suffers from all kinds of pollution . I'll write about air pollution as clean air is very important to live healthy .

                      There are several causes of air pollution . first, smoke which releases from cars . Second, The factories which are built every where . Third, the use of spray cans e.g. insecticides , perfumes etc .

                      As a result of air pollution , diseases are widespread , temperature becomes so high and therefore lack of crops .

                      To solve this problem people and the government should do their best . Cars should use clean petrol . Factories should be built far from cities . A lot of trees should be planted every where .

                      To sum up , air pollution is a very serious problem which threaten our lifes and our remaining on earth so, people and the government should co-operate to over come this problem .

pollution in Egypt

Introduction :-
_ Importance of clean enviroment to live healthy .
_ There are many kinds of pollution in Egypt .
_ The most prominent kind is air pollution .


Causes :-
_ Smoke results from cars .
_ Factories .
_ Burning of rice strow .


effects :-
_ Health problems resulting from air pollution in Egypt .
_ High temperature becouse of ozone hole .
_ Air pollution affect farming in Egypt .


Solutions :-
_ Factories should be built far from cities .
_ Cars should use clean petrol .
_ We should plant more trees to clean air .


conclusion :-
_ People and the government should co-operate to over come this problem .
_ We should solve this problem to keep life on earth .

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I'm Fatma elzahraa Magdi in 4th year

Suez Canal University

Faculty of Education

English department